It was almost great.
This song is on the verge of being a great song, it just needs a little push. It's kind of repetitive until about the last third or so. I only like to the hear the same measure a few times before I want something different. In the middle, it seemed like it couldn't decide what genre it was. If you had taken off with the fast tune, the song would have been great. Overall, oh, wait, I need to talk about the beginning. The start of a song needs to be like that introduction to an essay my crazy English teacher always wanted me to write. It needs to catch my attention and hold it. If I didn't know this was by you, I probably wouldn't have given it the benefit of the doubt that I did. Overall, it's an okay song, but it could be so much better.