I'll be like everyone else and say "guitar plox?"
Haha, a guitar would be nice but I think it sounds amazing as it is. Your piano sounds nice, as do your vocals. I like your voice, I might have to start putting up some of my vocal pieces. I really like this song.
I hope you die.
Mostly because your better than I am. haha
Good Job
nice singing, it sounds like you put a lot of work into it.
Almost...
Hey man. Good job. It's a nice song and the lyrics make a lot of sense to me. Could some work though. It has TONS of potetial. A guitar would be nice in there.
Something's amiss... or off...
Some things that came to my head when I listened to this track:
- Vocals need work. Lacks clarity at the end part. I'm thinking there's too much reverb. Try singing from the diaphragm; it'll give a thicker-sounding voice. Then again, maybe it's the EQ... add a little treble to give the vocals that crisp sound.
- Heard the lyrics; some off-rhymes, but it's the message that counts. Lacks catchiness, though.
- Good arrangement. The instrumentation is just superb.
- Try panning more.