such talent
i hope you're very proud of yourself. you possess so much talent and creativity i can hardly believe it. you write moving songs and stories. there's no doubt you could do anything involving music or movies.
Reviews for "Stranded"
had to...
almost at the top jazza, u just need more 10/10s and 5/5 ^^
Something's amiss... or off...
Some things that came to my head when I listened to this track:
- Vocals need work. Lacks clarity at the end part. I'm thinking there's too much reverb. Try singing from the diaphragm; it'll give a thicker-sounding voice. Then again, maybe it's the EQ... add a little treble to give the vocals that crisp sound.
- Heard the lyrics; some off-rhymes, but it's the message that counts. Lacks catchiness, though.
- Good arrangement. The instrumentation is just superb.
- Try panning more.
Amazing
This is the best submission I've heard in a long time. The vocals are amazing, the lyrics inspiring, and the melody beautiful. Jazza you never fail to impress me.
*Sniff* made me cry
So beautiful.... So true... So kick-ass.... This may inspire me to do vocal work in the future if my sister actually learns to sing.... LOLZ