this was good for a first flash movie
it wasnt bad. but some parts lasted too long, like when the guy jumped to the side while shooting. and the beginning was a little long. other wise it wasnt too bad. i can see your friend becoming better at this. just tell him to practice more and put more time and thought into it. he see's his movie differently than others and newgrounds is a bit extreme when it comes to reviewing movies. if you want a good un-blammed oppinion of your early work then ask some friends first to see your mistakes ahead of time, that way you can fix them. if you dont then people will just blam your work the second before you submit it ,because there are a lot of ignorant dicks that review on this site. keep up the good work