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Finally! Someone who's first flash isn't some load of garbage, thrown together for the sake of saying they made one.
I was hoping to be impressed by this entry, after reading your comments. I wasn't disappointed! Very nice job. The whole effort has a very simplistic, yet artistic feel to it. I wasn't crazy about the music, but that's my problem, as it was certainly appropriate for this movie.
Way to go!!
It takes 30 min. to load!
This movie is pretty cool i like it the sad thing about it it just takes 30 min. to load!
pretty cool.
it was well portrayed, but the graphics needed a bit more to be successful black/white. the song ate balls. but other than that, good work.
Unique; but came off as a little rough to me
I'll just say right off the block that your choice of music was okay, but it seemed a little quick for pace of the movie to me since you did have slow points in the movie; though I do admit that it was pretty slick of you to pace your movie to the music for the most part. Concerning your visuals, they were okay but IMO they came off as a little too rough; your movie to me would be more effective if the visuals were cleaned up a little so they were more 'in focus' overall than just at points; but it is quite unique since I can understand why you'd choose to have the key action points so rough (to simulate chaos of the moment I believe). It's a good flik, but IMO a little colour and cleaner visuals would make it seem less like a rough edit.
Great potential
If you just touched up the graphics and changed to a better song, (try "heart of sword" by yellow monkey) this would be excellent