Could be better
You have a good idea, but this just wasn't very good at all. It was slow, and kind of boring. I liked the music though. Still, I can't give you much for this, but revamp it and give it another try.
Could be better
You have a good idea, but this just wasn't very good at all. It was slow, and kind of boring. I liked the music though. Still, I can't give you much for this, but revamp it and give it another try.
Pretty good kid!
Keep it up, your doing great!