Eh...
I'll be honest, the part when he said "adict... adicted to you-" I couldn't help but think he was saying something else... (;_; It's not my fault...) Is it just me, or did it sound like...
Anyways! With the review part, I thought it was very good work until it was cut off short. I hope you will make another one and that it will be longer!
~~Battle-Demon~~
"If you don't succeed... Tonzura koite!"