I liked it
However, the graphics were terrible and the only thing that made up for it was the humour factor. The pacing could use improvement and more sound would help as well. I think you've got potential if you're just willing to try harder next time.
Thanks. I'm working a lot on my graphics offline. I'm hoping my next Flash film will be great.
WEIRDO
an evil puppy???U R WEIRD
U R? Say it with me, people. Letters are not words. Ok, there's I. And A. And in Olde English, there's O.
K?
You want to know what you're doing wrong...
Since this is art, this is "your perception through a medium." So you're not doing anything WRONG. But I will list a few reasons why what you are doing is perhaps not coming out as funny or as interesting as you want it to be:
1. Backgrounds should change, at least a little. Have you ever seen a movie or a sitcom that has just one background and doesn't even pan around it or zoom in on a character?
2. More sound, tastefully used, could help.
3. If the dialogue remains text-based, try to give the phrases more variety in terms of punctuation. The ellipses kinda wore me out.
4. Try to make the story more streamlined. It seemed like it was tripping from one weak gag to the next.
Thanks for your informative review.
well..
i cant say anything becausei couldn't do that. but it's ok.
It was two years ago after approximately 3 days of using Flash. ;) Someday I hope to do it justice.
as luke said "who writes this crap?"
Not a bad effort, but there was no sound until near the end, so there is something to work on. Otherwise, it was OK.
Yeah, 2 years ago I had no idea what I was doing. ;)