dont give up
you should go to more than just one place with this just you try to make the haracter too cool and thats what i dont like about him also the way that narrator talked was umm kinda weird if you let a tv place upgrade the looks and animation and change a little of the way people act this may hit tv. frankly characters who arent serious looking and not cool all the time hits better with the veiwers when on tv. on flash its okay because its so short but it will get old after so many 30 minute episodes. this may sound odd but this looks like something up shonen jumps (a japanese magazine company they made DBZ, Bleach, Death note, and code gease and alot of other stuff and put it on tv) alley if it goes 2D and instead of the evil doctor the villin is a alien badass (i just thought it would fit together better or it may make it look like ben 10 not sure wich) I know there in japan but who knows it may turn out ok. good luck