A classic
They will sure learn with this!
Reviews for "A Surfer_Clock Math Fable"
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I liek :) I like the way you drew the characters and the expressions. ^_^ they looks nice/cute. some of the lines do look messy. hm, I would say to not rely that much on the pain brush tool, and clean up the stuff by not painting on top of other things, and grouping stuff so you can edit diff parts individually. hm then just use like 'lines' shapes. to border stuff out and fill it in to get nicer outlines on things ^_^
= hm, but that could be the style/look you wanted :) I dont know...
my only complaint is the font, its rather hard to read. making it bold would help :)
Well..
Ive become addicted to fable on the xbox and typed fable into the search thing. This is what popped up. Not fable related, but not excactly bad either.
Surfer-Clock responds:
You should propose an idea for a Fable-themed flash movie to the fine minds of the Newgrounds BBS. I'm sure they'd collaberate with you on one. Thanks for the review, and Happy Holidays.
Ah.
I read one of your responses to one of the reviewers, and I'm happy to think that you are can reply so calmly. I thought the story to this movie was slightly confusing, but it doesn't mean it's bad. I reconized a few bits and peices from Zelda, am I right?
It was cute, and I think you should keep trying your best!
~~Battle-Demon~~
"If you don't succeed... Tonzura koite!"
Surfer-Clock responds:
You are correct about the Zelda tidbits, and the story's title was ever so misleading, but I'm glad that people take their time and see that just because I'm a below-par animator doesn't mean I can't write and spell. Thanks for your thoughtful and intellegent review. It's people like you who make Newgrounds a better place. I can't wait to see Flash work from you, (that is, if you ever have time.) and I will keep trying. ^_^
Good story, at least.
The story is really cute, and I give you bonus points in humor because you used the name "Claire Voyant".
However, the art really leaves to be desired. It looks like you put most of the time into making the faces, then just doodled in bodies and backgrounds. Take your time, smoothe out the lines, and pay attention to "minor" things; it's all the little things that really make a flash, including backgrounds.
Also, the straight line tool isn't the devil. You have a cute, "grade schoolers won't care" style, but please remember this this IS Newgrounds, and even the grade schoolers here can see that you didn't put that much effort into, say for instance, the trees.
Surfer-Clock responds:
o.o An objective analysis? ^_^ Wow! Excellent review!! I love it, so well written, and just....*dies* This is the first great review I've had in a long time. Might I add that I only had a few weeks to do this, so I couldn't really put much into this. I'm glad you liked the story, it took me about 3 days to get all written to fit the math theme of graphs. I have since taken lessons in drawing. :P So, anyways, I thank you deeply for the analysis of my little ol' fable. Happy Holidays to you. ^_^