Great work!
I like the beggining effects and sound. Good work on that. The transition was very nice and professional. The guitar sounds very realistic. Really nice work on that. More nice transitions... nice fills. A little quiet, but still great. Nice re-introduction of the synth, after that is a good break with some choir. I like it, but again its pretty quiet. I dont like the weird guitar sound very much, but it isnt too bad. Nice pitch sliding at 3:00. ...wow this song is long :P Another good transition. Starting to drag a little, but a nice piece for a flash movie, which should be the purpose anyway.
Okay, ambient voices now. Sound professional, but takes a while. I can't tell what the person is really saying either. Another very nice intro. With a little of choir-like synth. More nice synth now. Pretty nice exit on 6:15. Nice fade out of the instruments. I think the last synth delay out could have been a little better.
Overall, very nice work! I look forward to more music!