Pretty good for what it is
The graphics you drew certainly stuck to what the rap was about and are well synk'd to the music.
It's nice to see that you made something original and stayed away from what the other author did in his version of the Zelda rap video.
All I can suggest is that you change that "sex meter" shot because it nearly confused me into thinking that it was the end of this piece. Other than that, this is pretty good.
Keep it up