hmmmm
i love the music in the background, but the rapping is not personaly my taste.
the begining verses, before it goes to the first montonic rant is very bad with the flow and the vocalization itself leaves alot to be bad.
i got alot of laughs from the monotonic rants.
the second tonal verse came in, and made me realize that it sounds alot like juggalo rappers, who i hate.
then the monotone came back and i was amused once again, as well as i like the fade out.
all in all, 4/5, good job but it does need some work.