Nice!
Calm beginning which leads into some good melodical metal afterwards. Drums were audible but gaaah way to quite the hole time. >: /
Also...could I hear the cuts you did? Yes I could or at least it sounded like that. If you need to cut a layer or overrecord something, watch out that the signal you recorded does go smooth with the previous recording. Maybe it just sounded strange because of the drums but that just for the info. ;)
Anyways, quite cool track. Missed some bad ass riffs but it was good overall. Still 5/5 since the current score is undeserved!