I want to like it
Sure I want to like this movie, it's one of the most original pieces I've seen on Newgrounds, however at the same time while the principle purpose of art is self-expression it's merit is measured by how well it connects with the audience. I doubt anyone who viewed your piece really left it with a true understanding of what you were trying to convey. Because of this while this is a technical success, it is very much an artistic failure.