Please, no more violins!
I'm sorry, but the violins at the beginning were just too repetative for me. I decided to, in true reviewist fashion, continue the song, and hear it all the way through. What I heard at about halfway was very catchy and original, but then those violins came back, and an annoying harpschord seemed to have been added. (It likely wasn't but that's what it sounded like) A bit repetative for my tastes, even for trance, and those violins, really didn't help it much.
I'd have to say that while the inspirational piece in the middle was worth waiting for, the sudden melody change back to those violins at 1:57 gave me the feeling of 'Dear God, not again! Ithought it was over!' So I suppose you would be better off staying AWAY from violins in the future.
6/10
Don't sweat it though, everyone has good and bad tracks.