Fantastic
This was actaually pretty fantastic, it was very high quality and had some decent stuff to it, but it does need more robot stuff in there, more mech stuff thats what it lacked, but for the most part of it it was pretty good and showed good effort on your part so nice effort there, so as for improving i suuggest more mech stuff, more stuff that makes it standout from the rest, something for you to tryout, and some slight more animation stuff, but otherwise i like what you did here, anyways good luck on whatever you got going on here and on your next piece.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So for starters, could use more mech stuff, and more animated stuff aswell.