Nice Follow Up
The opening was a little bit clunky (I wasn't into John Totty's character all that much but the two running toward each other with tongues out was great) but once it got on its feet it didn't dissappoint. You're syncrinization still isn't perfect but it's much better and it's good enough that it doesn't really take anything away. I really like your drawing style, it really fits this sort of material. Some great humor throughout the piece, don't hesitate to do another should the inspiration hit.