Moments of Brilliance
Great! Good Job. You have some good dialogue in this..
you should edit out the whole cum in your mouth and swallow scene...that's just disgusting.
But I laughed at the "wanna smoke?" joke..
and the fart flash cracked me up...actually rolling the credits was hysterical.
What? Whats this...BLAMMED!
The font and color could have been a little easier to read.
Graphics were right on!
All in all, you got talent kid..
keep it up!