That was good.....
Well this is pretty decant stuff...BUT THE STORY WAS FUCKING HORRIBLE.... when i see the title sonic&link I expect to see link for roughly the same about of time i see sonic, yet link dies right away....AND WHY THE HELL ARE PEOPLE POPING OUT OF NO WHERE, WHY IS SONIC AFTER MARIO!? WHYY!!! It looks like you made up the story as u went, somtimes that can work out, but in this case it didnt.....Learn how to write a story