Hmmm... I like it ^^
Not bad... I kinda like the beat, I love the lead! but you know what would be great meanwhile the lead? Strings... and maybe use a less rough beat, it emphazes over the beautiful melody^^ but that's a good song ^^ i'm sure that with some practice, you'll be great!^^ anyways good luck to you!
Hey thanks for the review and I will take your advice into consideration for my next song. Especially adding a string to my lead :)
itkinda funny
its funny and serious at the same time. and its a good beat with good melody 5/5.
dooby
Hey thanks for the review man. Appreciate it. Ya its kinda serious in the beginning and then funny afterwards.
Hmm well
No one helped you out with the demo...no comments. :( Well I guess you ended up doing the final version with no extra help. Ppl are selfish. :) j/k for the most part. Now to your song. It has a atmosphery space feel. Highly repetitive with you playing down the scale many many times. The drums were okay but your drum transitions seemed miss timed. Never really builds up to anything. Like the fx sounds. You really didn't have to do the crappy vox at the beginning. It is funny though. If you were trying to give the impression that after the explosion the listener is to feel lost in the destruction...well kudos cause that is what I felt. However the transition was too abrupt into the new theme. Overall a good song and gets a 5/5. The creativity helped change the 4 to a 5. There needs to be more action. Ppl flag me on my songs of lacking bass. I think yours also suffered the same problem. For your 3rd song, you are improving at a fast rate. Reason to smile and gl with your future songs. Need reviews? Well just pm me. Also a bunch of guys from the dance section love to rev. too. We dance ppl like to give feedback. Bye for now
Yeah, after the explosion I tried to make it feel that way. I guess it worked :)
Yeah I kinda see it getting repetitive with the scale. Next time I will def put bass in.
Thanks so much for review and I will def pm you, if needed. If you need me to review just pm me too. I also like dance music, so I will be reviewing.
Thanks again.