((VOTED 5))
I thought the song was pretty good. The synth was slow yet didnt lose my interest which is hard to do in songs like this. The drums were pretty good too and kept a really nice beat.
The one problem I had with this song though was that every thing seamed really chaotic and out of place. Everything had a hard time flowing together smoothly. But I dont blame you because for one thing you were trying to get as close to as a song as possible without reading so much as a notesheet or getting any base music which is a hard thing to do. So good job with what you did here. I really enjooyed it.