Fruity Loops^-^;
This song starts off very FruityLoops like, but that is not a good reason not to like it. Sweet melodies! A good thought out song. I find it very lovable!
Originality: It sounds really FruityLoops like, but the song is mastered very well, and sounds really nice to the ears.
Diversity: Great work on the build up towards the end, and sweet melodic patterns throughout the song. The drum stays the same, but it fits the song well^-^
Advice: To make it sound like it doesnt come from FruityLoops. Can be quite a challenge, but when you do so, itll be much more original and youll get more listeners! Maybe you dont know what I mean with this yet, but you will after you work with fruityloops for a while:P
I loved this song man, I hope to hear more from you(: