Here are my thoughts
Yeah the drum into at 8 secs in worked good. I've heard this drum loop pattern alot but first from you so still good. The hi hat is nice but sounds like your hitting a hard wood block that stops too quickly giving the unnatural feel. The tune is good to I guess chill to. At 1:00 the piano playing is nice. However I think your velo on some notes may be too hard. Usually its the high pitch ones for this song. (Is that the 2nd piano causing the overpowering piano stabs?) I like the piano playing from 1:48 to 2:02. Yeah the reintroduction of the piano staccatos with the velo problem. Oh that one sound to finish the song was really nice. Overall a bit loopy, but you can't chill to diverse music so I'll still give you a 10 on diversity. A good relaxing feel I got from this. This could work for lounge music. Another good house track. Blammed, well I guess it was gonna happen sooner or later. Til next time...bye for now.