Needs a faster pace
Toooooo sloooooooooooooooooooooooowwww wwww
Reviews for "The School Ep 1"
boooooring
your drawings need work but the animation was very good.spelling was bad but even more wore was the story.
So Bored
Must go to sleep but must finish flash....but cant keep eyes open. Anyway way to boring u got skills though and u could makes some great ones. Try to add some humor or action to spice up the movies keep the audience awake
therookie responds:
Yeah i know it got boring but.. I had ideas in the beginning. But now i have a storybord that will help me and i have concentrated on the humor now
eh
this is like a 1960's movie id watch in class
write scripts for your animations, they will come out much better