:D
Hmm. You should get a different piano synth, that's the first thing that I noticed :P. That main synth is kinda loud. There's not much else to say here. It was relaxing and chill. A cheerful work day, hmm?
Reviews for "[TMM43] Work Day"
Not bad!
It was pretty good... The first time i listened to it i was like: "....OKK....." But then i read your response to a review explaining the song and it made sense. My opinion: it was kinda boring to be put in techno It could probably be classified as ambient/techno. But I understand, cause on NG, you can only put it in one genre. the piano seemed very FL...-ish but that's ok. The track itself could use some lengthening, and possibly a breakdown in the middle with the piano and some drumroll action for when you got down with your secretary... (jk about the secretary, but it seriously could use a breakdown) oh and i know i'm a hypocrite, but get some better claps. I hope you enjoyed my lenghty review and enjoy the restroom conveniently located on the first floor.
-Logini
pretty chill track
I like this, nice upbeat kind of song XD Not very many of my workdays have ever fit this track XD I'm glad that at least one person out there had that kind of day at work XD
This is pretty good but sounds like one big loop, so i give it a strong 4/5 :)
Keep it up!
~Twistedtechnology
TMM43 responds:
Thanks for the review Twistedtechnology!
As I said in the response to the review before this one, my work day does fit this! haha. xD
Eh. I kinda didn't want this to sound like a loop...Sorry about that.
Thanks for the review! I greatly appreciate it!
Thump thump
Decent dance track. The piano stuff reminded me of something from Coldplay :] <---I hope thats not an insult...I am not much a Coldplay guy, so I prolly shouldnt even name drop.
What kind of workday would inspire this?! Maybe it was your desire to go hit the club and get loose.
Keep it wildstyle!
JAG
TMM43 responds:
Thanks for reviewing beatmasterJAG!
Reminds you Coldplay? That's not an insult, they have some good piano pieces! Thanks. :)
I wanted this piece to reflect a hectic day.
I wake up, its kinda slow (piano). Then I rush to make the train (The beat and start of synth). Sleep on train (slowdown after beat). Get to work, rushing around (beat and everything). Slow down for lunch (short beat and bass part). Rush to finish work/get on train (synths and everything). Long and slow ride home (piano fading out).
haha. That's what I wanted it to be like.
Again thanks for your review!
and the wheels on the buss
ahahahah, just kidding. So what do wehave here, piano and some simple snyths. sound like your day is an easy one. goodwork on this. 4/5
TMM43 responds:
I don't take the bus in, I take the train. hahah
I didn't want the simple piano and synths to be a reflection of my work day, although it may sound like that. haha
Thanks for the review!