ok
i'll just say you have potential. if you plan to make others do something different. i think the stick figure thing is being used too much . i am in no way trying to discourage you. just trying to be honest. i give you the 2 thumbs up for your first flash movie.
Keep trying
It was good for a first flash and the part with the giant hamster was funny... I am just starting to make them too and it is hard when you are first starting out..
sorry
but i cant give you more than 1 because , even if this is your first flash , it isnt up to scratch , before you submit learn how to layer your flash and then learn how to tween , i know this is your first , but if your only going to use one layer ( and a stick man) you wont get very far , useing flash isnt easy at first , but keep trying and eventully youl get it.
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Not so much to say, but: I give most movies a higher score than others, and careful is spelled with an "e" <------ That was only because i wanted to be more of an asshole. HA-HA!
...ok...
thanks at least for compressing the flash file down. but only the hamster part made me chuckle a little bit...other than that...back to the drawing board man, sorry.