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Reviews for "another try!"

What? Give it a story-line

It needs a pre-loader with a message of what it is about - like a movie poster you see at the theatre.

Type slower - write - not writh

It needs a story/plot! - not just random drawings.

Add explosion sounds when appropriate.

Good animation though.

elkatra responds:

I don't really now how to make a preloader, but I try some things
thx for the tips

If "it's not ready"

why did you submit it (again)? Granted it's slightly longer this time, but the quality of the added frames is significantly worse than the stuff we already blammed. Finish and then come back with it.

If it ain't ready....

then why would u like 2 submit it???
I'm gonna have 2 give it a 1.....

This is not ready u say.....

...but u want us not to vote badly.. Well, have it ready before submitting it.. Wait..... from what I saw, just start over.