It'll probably be blammed, but I hope it returns..
Hey.
I really feel that your idea was good. Nice choice of music. However, you spend too much time with fade in/outs of single lines of text, with a rare picture added. Therefore, I would like to make some suggestions that could help if you are up for a remake....
1) if you want to use the fade technique for the text, make sure each line is a complete sentence or thought.
2) a few more pictures wouldn't hurt, and quite possibly would help.
3) a lot of people have doen this fade tribute... why not a scrolling text tribute, with pictures fading in and out.
I appreciate the tribute, and probably voted higher than normal, but it really needs work.