Cool
Good slow song, your sister's voice is good, but needs a little more training. Came together nicely, though.
Cool
Good slow song, your sister's voice is good, but needs a little more training. Came together nicely, though.
Better without the voice
The song sounds cool in the beginning, but when the voice came up, it was a little weird to listen to. Your sister doesn't have a bad voice, but the voice sounds young and a bit inexperienced, so it makes this audio piece sound unfinished, like a piece-in-progress. You could try making one using the melody here but sans the singing, or you could work with your sister a little more to get some vibrato and clarity to her tone. Good, though.
UH WHAT!
Very beautiful song and I love that you spent time with your sister doing this. I'd love to make a music video for this with special effects and in fact I'm calling a buddy of mine to see if he's busy. Great Job!!!
pretty good
your sisters voice is pretty good! my sister (12) and i were thinking of doing the same, but you beat us!! good song!
Not bad
Your sister's voice ain't too bad
but lyrics need to be better
music too
maybe less repetition of the same theme