Not a bad tribute...
That was actually pretty good....although only people who've watched Evangelion would understand exactly what's going on. Maybe you should have picked a more easily accessible scene. That way less people will be left in the dark about what you're trying to do.
Anyway, I liked this. Good work!
I still find it funny how certain reviwers claim to be more mature and act anything but that....but I'll leave it alone. Some people are just set in their ways.