Nice flash
ITs quite refreshing to see something just that extra bit unique. Or maybe I'm seeing a flash that's not about total violence.
Or maybe I'm biased to Comics.
Or maybe I'm rambling on a bit.
Who knows...
Reviews for "IMMORTAL #2"
StenFLASH responds:
Heheh, i tend to ramble on at times too. I'm glad you like the comicy feel i've given the animation.
An improvement over number 1
I like the idea of using scenarios to go from one idea of suicide to the next, but it hasn't been established as to why he wants to comit suicide that badly. Also it'd be a nice touch if you made a referrence as to why he wants to go around killing people, now that he's found out he's immortal. One last thing I'd like to add *a thought for added humour*; why not have him pick up his head in frustration, once he fails to die through decapitation? Overal, nice job. I look forwards to number 3.
StenFLASH responds:
That's a good idea (the frustration thing)!
Basically, he was commiting suicide at the start because he found his life too stressful. He was sick of worrying when he was going to die from some freak stick accident so he took it upon himself to choose how and when he'd die. When it didn't work the first time he thought "what the? i'm immortal?" and he then wanted to confirm it to himself by trying again and again. He didn't care at that point if it actually did work because he planned on killing himself at the start anyway. Once he realised he really is immortal he lost the stress and worry of 'when and how' he would die from events not under his control.
You'll have to see what he does when he gets to the city. I haven't said he want's to go around ranndomly killing people have i! :)
I rambled on quite a bit here.. wonder if it made sense.
Hmm...
I want a decapitation machine; Then again, don't we all?
StenFLASH responds:
I reckon there's a few crazy people who don't.
hmmm
maybe you should have tried some kind of machine that rips out his insides....oh yeah good times.
Good job
This was a good movie i only marked you down because you said you were gonna continue it the next week... and uh its about 4 months after you submitted it. But other than that good job.