Wow!
Wow. This was a really good piece.
The first thing that popped out at me was the piano and the choir. The choir seemed to fit perfectly with the smooth piano part.
The bass was really good too. It didn't overpower, yet it influenced the song in important ways. It effectively made up for the lack of percussive instruments.
The strings are really nicely done and are very legato styled. They blend well with the background.
My only complaint is length. It had a long build and was very short. I would advise more length and also some more variation, although this was very good without those two things.
Keep up the good work!