ok but a few problems
i like the originality of the bosses and villain but i must stress the pronunciation of navi(na-veye) as you said is wrong, its actual pronunciation is navi(naw-vee) also i get where you were trying to go with this one but the song of storms has almost nothing to do about the castle of hyrule. third if link is mature the castle shouldnt be all nice and peaceful as you portrayed but overrun by gannondorf and his undead(which if you have played the game you probably know the song of storms freezes these undead, hence the only relativity with the castle all and all i liked it a small amount.