good
Good, but u might wanna consider making the episodes longer
Reviews for "IMMORTAL #1"
StenFLASH responds:
I do plan on making them a little longer but I can't make them too long otherwise they wont be coming out weekly.
I guess my idea with the first one was to keep it short n sweet to gain interest.
ok
its ok too short tho but i like the gun part! BUT WHY IS STICK LIFE HARD?
StenFLASH responds:
Sticks lives are so hard because their life span is so short. The live on average about 5-30secs so naturally this would make them rather nervous -ie. stressed, by not knowing when their times up but that its going to be up soon.
And this is supposed to be short, like I had specified, because its a 'comic' that comes out regularly.
Wow neat
Waaay too short.. but i really like the action in the comic cells.
StenFLASH responds:
It is pretty short but its a weekly comic strip so it sort of has to be. Especially if it's to come out weekly. They will be longer though! This first one was me just getting use to the 'comic cell' thing I did.
like kurt cobain
ya
ummm?
StenFLASH responds:
I've heard the name before. Too busy to do a google search to find out who you're talking about.
cool
it has like a graphic novel noir approach.