Potential
Well I guess the issue of sound recording quality has been pretty well covered, personally a review of the voice actors mic technique would improve it immensely. The storyline is intriguiging altho it felt a little like the phantom menace, by this I mean theres a lot of plot points trying to be covered in one go. I'd slow down the pace of the storyline and increase the action in each scene. But I like what I've seen, and look forward to seeing the future developments.