Reviews for Lord of the Rings part 1

[adam-p89]

good start

That was great! I loved how you drew the characters, and how you made all the elves standing in a line, but when they fired their arrows, instead of just drawing an arrow and motion tweening it away from them, you could animate one elf firing an arrow, then make it a movie clip and copy paste it many times then they would all be smoothly firing arrows, that would be so cool...and if you downloaded some lord of the rings music of kazaa or something, then converted it to .wav in a program like cool edit, you could import it in and keep the file size low, anyway it is still the best lord of the rings flash I have yet seen, hope you improve and finish it!

Adam

[Cellophane]

Slow down!

Way way too fast on the subtitles. You NEED some music playing, too. Sauron looked a little goofy but his mask is really intricate so its forgivable, perhaps simplifying it would work better rather than trying to catch every detail. There's potential here

[Zuul0025]

Well. .

I could like everyone else and say it sucks (Though 90% does, in fact), but I believe constructive criticism is better than saying "It sucks" and being done with it. I liked the way you started off in the beginning, with the words fading in and out, but where it REALLY annoyed me was when you got to the elves, human, etc. part of it, you could barely read the words and IF you could they went off the screen too fast to read anyways. I turned it off halfway, you need to add sound (Which I'm sure you will and I"m sure it will improve this flash)

[Havoncia]

where's the fucking twist?

If I wanted to see the movie, I would rent the video.

[TurtleSoup]

nah

this isnt very good.... compared to MonkeyClock's version.

The graphics aren't very good, theres no sound, no violence...

try harder next time