Not bad
I like the way you made this, you have some real talent. But, honestly, if you want to take it a step further and improve upon it, I'd ease up on making each frame so different and unique. I like how you tried to give it that shaky, sketchy look, but you don't want to over due it. Sometimes it almost made me want to look away because the screen looked so busy. You have to find a median that supports both aspects of your animations. Nice start though (: