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a way you could improve is make more... there's barely anything to see... 3 scenes... that was it.. add more action.. more animation.. make a plot. don't submit a trailer hoping for a great score. And if your other movie is say... 10 times the length of this one.. then go ahead and submit that. People see trailers as crap, and you have to give them a show... not a 10 second show.