Cool, good start.
Wow, I thought you really had some solid scenes in there. Even though the preloader doesn't work, it was a pretty good movie =) You only get better, later.
Peace,
AlexXD11
Reviews for ":Frantic: A one man army:"
your loader doesnt work...
and you have no idea how much some people hate that
the movie was ok for a beginner flash tho
A promising start
First of all let me say that I don't like sticks and I think the flash community is already overrun with far too much of it...that said, your piece shows promise. Your movement is fluid and your text and credits are extremely well-drawn. If you can bring the character design up to this level your work will be excellent. As an aside, you need to add some color contrast as well...the black stickman against a black background stuff is just a big black nothing. Keep at it, though! I'll be looking forward to more and better work from you in the future.
Good
Pretty good, but where he says It's a dead end, the text box was too small ad you souldn't see it all. anyway, keep up the good work.
Voodoo223 responds:
Thank's man. I'll fix that problem with the text also...