Could use some proof reading but overall I like it.
Reviews for "Fateless"
This was fun!
some things disappeared when i touched the wather
it is a bug,a feature or is it something else that i missed?
It's... alright. Very cool idea similar to Until Dawn, hampered by lacking english (important in a game like this), bad controls and often frustrating level design.
I'm a pretty big fan of these kinds of games, and for the most part it was pretty good, although there were some glaring issues.
Firstly is the English. I'm not one to pick on people whose first language isn't English, but for a primarily story-based game, it needs to be easily comprehended. I'm sure you could find people (including me) who would be more than willing to help you refine it.
Another issues is some of the gameplay. It's nigh impossible to pass certain stealth sections due to characters you aren't controlling refusing to jump, or certain segments where major guesswork is required.
Finally, the save feature. I didn't even know there was one until reading some reviews, and that's a pretty big issue.
All in all, this game was pretty fun and interesting, but unfortunately held back. It has a lot of potential though, and I'd love to revisit it down the line if these issues are resolved.