A demo?
Aww, they're nowhere near as fun as full songs. Aah well... if it's a work in progress, I suppose a finished version will come sooner or later. ;)
Hmm. This doesn't quite have the same grandeur, the same great feeling as your other songs in the beginning. Also - your drums' quality is questionable. The reeverb detracts from the sound quality, in my opinion.
The melody of the song takes its time to develop, too. But once it does, it's good! It really gets that epic feeling that I think you're aiming at... however, the strings that play it feel a bit weak and could have used something in the lower range to support them... some brass, I think, would have done nicely and also the right ones might add to your attitude... if not, then some lower-end strings would help.
Interesting choice with the sitar... though it feels a bit out of place. I'm no expert with them... but single notes won't do if you want one in this song. I think that you should try getting a "strummed" feeling on the sitar, strumming a chord. Something like that. Experiment... I'm sure that multiple notes strummed together will have much greater effect than single ones. Of course, single notes are okay in between strums... like I said, experiment. ;)
I like those chanting effects there! However, they share the similar low-quality sound with the drums. Was this, by any chance, exported at a low bitrate? That might explain it... if not, well... keep trying to make it sound better, I guess.
You end on an interesting note... that high-pitched and plucked-sounding violin (that's what it sounded like to me) gives it a bit of that Meditteranean feel... if you know what I mean. :P It also gives the song a feel of regret, as if all of the warriors who participated in this brutal fight depicted in your song suddenly look at the firey, bloody battlefield about them and regret the damage they have caused to each other... and themselves. No, I'm not giving you any more of an story than that... it's a work in progress, after all. :P I'm saving the full thing for if you upload it on NG.
Last question - can you tell me about this Escalation game? I'm interested. :)
Great work, Maestro, though it could definitely use more. I'm looking forward to hearing the finished version. :)