Reviews for The Elegant Parasite Black

[NekoMika]

Nice story and pic

This actually kind of looks like a snake with a messed up head and having claws and arms as well. So it's a raptor snake possibly? I don't know. This just looks cool though.

The good of it is it looks like you spent detail and attention drawing this.

Probably the only bad part about it is it seems it could do with having a background added to it, that would make it look pretty cool if you ask me.

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Celx-Requin responds:

Cool,

Thanks for the review, I wanted to make the creature insect like, kind of like a praying mandid.

Thanks,
- Celx

[Fro]

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It's cool that there is a story behind the picture, but the better thing to do is to do is to create a picture that instead can create a story for each individual person that looks at it.

When I look at this picture I don't really get much from it. I think it has a lot to do with it's simplistic nature and major lack of detail. The color black might have been too dark in this case. I feel that if the color was a bit lighter that you could have really put a lot of detail into the creature at hand. A mixture of colors would also be better fitting.

So yeah, more detail and a better array of colors would have made this more appealing to the eye. I also would have liked it better with some sort of background.

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Celx-Requin responds:

I guess if I ever do use the character again, I should have more going on.
But for this specific piece it is what it is...

Thanks,
- Celx

[InsertFunnyUserName]

3/5

I like the simplicity of the design. It's good logo material. The spikes and other assorted things protruding out from its body really gives it a nice "parasite" feel.

However, on the topic of the spikes and bumps, I think that they need to be a little more uniform in relation to each other. For instance, the center spike on its back isn't shaped like the other two. It bulges before it tapers, whereas the other ones just taper. Also, I feel like the little nubs on the middle of his back should be an equal distance from each other.

There's something about the eye (I think that's what it is) that bothers me. I think it's a bit too far back and possible a little big. The pupil should be a bit rounder, as well.

My last suggestion is to make the body/head more centered over the tail. Not a lot, but a little bit more.

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Celx-Requin responds:

Yeah I need to clean it up a bit, the sketched version has a lot more detail, and looks a little better...

Thanks for the review!
- Celx