Very good
But may have been better if you'd submitted it along with the first part of your series. However, the intro was very good and speaks of great things to come. I was quite impressed with your use of an Asian language (I am guessing it to be Japanese?) and the subtitles were timed very well with it. The sound was very good, I look forward to the rest of the series.
Pax ex,
Muted Tempest