ehh..
Great idea and all.. but a couple things.
Sound, can't hear jack shit over top the DDR butterfly sound track.. so u might wanna tone that down a bit. And uh.. Your stickmen sucked a bit, their "guns" looked like penises. Not to mention u seemingly got shot 50 times, and yet.. yer aiightz? I THINK u need to get your storyline straight and all. Cuz without any, u cant' get very far.