nice : )
The beginning synths were pretty interesting, to say the least. :P
You've got a lot of nice low frequencies in there. I'd try keep from overusing that trance synth in the whole song, it could get annoying and crowded...
There's also some problems with clipping; just a few, so nothing that ruins the song. Just watch each channels individual volume.
The one thing I notice in every one of your songs is the large amount of variety. That can be really good most times, but don't make it so that you can't sustain a decent groove for a bit.
Another thing that kinda bugs me is the lack of bass... I don't doubt that there's some lower instrument in there, but I can't really get into it. Trance usually has an offbeat or rhythmic variation of that pattern.
I really did like that stuttering synth though, it gave a glitchy yet ambient feel... I'm assuming you used a bit of reverb on it? :) At the end you used this arp... it could work really well as an outro, but make sure it's in the same scale.
You've got a lot of great ideas, but you just need to work on getting everything smoothed out and organized.
Hope that wasn't too critical... :P Oh, and kudos to EchozAurora. :)
Nice job, keep it up man.
~cornandbeans