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Reviews for "Defective"

Yeah.

While the plot has been done, it's not often anything on NG has any clout. Yeah. I guess you read any one of the post-modern "big brother = bad" books. Brave New World, The Giver, 1984... etc. etc. or watched any of the many movies that play off the idea. It was cute.

Odd but good none the less

for some reason it reminded me of the book, The Giver. Its a good read if u ever have the chance btw

Virgilcomic responds:

Some other voters recommended that book, too. I didn't read it before I wrote this, but I see the similarities. It's a good book.

This movie, made me think about things!

I Liked it! It was cool made!
However, it was quite long, and some of the text
fadet away too quikly!
But it it was cool, and the ida was cool too!
Nice animation!
Great story!

Virgilcomic responds:

Try to use the pause button. Sorry if it was too fast. If I would do this again(which I won't- waste of time), I would make it more like Firewing in execution.

I CANT GIVE YOU A TEN

Undoubtedly, this is one of the better things on new grounds. The graphics are unique and the sound is atmospheric, and this movie actually has a message although its not a terribly original one. Yes, we are victims to socializational constraints and have become creatures of approximate knowledge and will power.
The reason I couldnt give you a ten is that this movie is painful to watch in its entirety, it is wayyyyy too long for a newgrounds short and tedious at times. Chapter one could have been skipped altogether, or you could have done it in two parts. I feel bad giving you 9 because I know the effort was remarkable and by all means, if this were a class, youd definitely get an A+. I just found myself bored throughout a lot of it, and I couldnt wait for the end.
Shorter skits please.

Virgilcomic responds:

Thanks for the critique, Tayo. It's greatly appreciated and can be quite helpful in perfectling my writing and such.

absolutely awesome

What a great storyline and animation to boot. That's all I can say. Sadly, this is the course our society seems to be on right now, andyou've stated it perfectly. We're all being raised with pills being cure-alls, but even with the usage of pills, we won't be able to use them to find true happiness. That's not something that can be given by a pill. Thanks for making something so poignant!

-- Kitty

Virgilcomic responds:

Thanks Kitty, and since you seem to be the last reviewer, I want to take this opportunity to thank all those who supported me. Sorry I don't have the time to respond to all the reviews.