Music is good!
Text hints are ok, but reloading the page should not be a game mechanic.
- Jumping while only a pixel or 2 of your character are still on the ground is necessary for some jumps. For it's only three or four jumps, it's ok. If you make more of these jumps the game will start to feel like a lottery.
- Could use a few more "dead ends"
- Could use a "restart game" button or a "warp device" when a dead end was found and no further text is coming
- Should definetely be longer
- Instead of "resetting" the torches when touching a save point, torches should burn out after like ~15 seconds. This would force the player to grab a new one from time to time, and could even force him to throw it before it extinguishes to see traps ahead.
- Definetely needs monsters after a few levels
- Definetely needs a boss mob that trapped you there. (maybe a ghost scared of torchlight?)