Woah
I can see, in my head, the scenes that this piece of music creates: an intense stare-down followed by a fast-paced action scene. If I were a flash artist (which I am not) I'd use this in a top-notch flash series. But only top-notch.
I doubt that you'll top this. In my (lame) opinion, I think you should keep this the way it is.
Sick build up
The opening pad needs to be compressed, it peaks too loud. Crazy ass effects leading into the bass part, its all centered in the middle though. Panning them from side to side would have made this more complete, but your still working on this, so doesnt matter.
The melody was alittle weak at the end. Maybe descending the pattern from the highest note would make it sound better. It would be more diverse at least. But i dunno, you seem to know what your trying to create
so good job
not as intense as timebomb
this is still good tho, a lot like noisia in this one. my input on the song: make hat thing more diverse and fill the sond with more than a synth, bass, and drums. add sfx or a pad. it sounds gapped.
can't wait for the final product! :D
Great! Could use a bit more, though.
Gaaahhh... I can't wait until the day I get so good my songs are practically reviewing themselves, like yours are. >_< Until then... I'll contribute to yours! =D
Good opening, great synths. They got a bit loud... aah, that's your melody I assume? Hmm. Your drums are a bit simple and weak here, I was expecting something a bit... bassier. More synths, good... the song's developing. The song's beginning to justify itself! =D
Wow, now I see where you're going with this song. Great job.
Your melody's great as is... not changing it would definitely be a good move... BUT, changing it to something better would be a better one! =D I hope you do... something just like what you have, except with more creative rhythms, and a better-chosen synth.
Your harmonies don't do much until the song develops... and then they make GREAT harmony with the melody! My only complaint is that I felt there were too few things that made harmony. You could have used another one. The synth that you chose for the one harmony that I heard was a good one, though, and fit.
Your percussion is a bit simple, and could use work in the beginning, when there's nothing bassier. I understand having a place to build up to, but with the months on top of months of experience that you have, I'm sure you can think of something better. ;)
Attitude... well, there's definitely that classic CnB DnB attitude there. Woah! CnB DnB. Has anyone thought of that yet? XD
Great DnB, I can't wait to hear the full version! Keep up the good stuff. =)
It's just a preview....
.....I can't wait....