A great effort
I can tell you are a passionate story teller, and this movie reminds me of all the fantasy series I would think up which were loosely based on other RPGs. Nice sprite work and direction - the music choices added alot of emotional impact. The one and only thing (and I know you mentioned it)......farther. Why? unless you are foreign, I do not understand how a person with the amount of talent you possess could mispell father. Not only once, but every single time, and you used the word farther many many times. I was beginning to think that it was an intentional pseudo-joke, although I wouldn't see the humour. Anyways, not trying to be too harsh, it's just odd is all. Nice work though, let's see some more entertaining episodes.